Response to Simon Bates' Feedback

I feel the feedback our group was given by Bates was encouraging in some areas, but disappointing in others. As for the information factors of our video, we got full marks on most of the informational sides to our video, which I was very pleased about as we took a lot of care to make sure everything was featured in our video. We did not score so highly on the aesthetics of the video. The sections requiring it to be fast, appealing to the correct age range and using effective live footage were all given a three out of five. I wasn't at all pleased with these and was surprised that it was that way around as our group holistically is one that focuses more on the visual aspects of our video being effective.